PoemsBrowse PoemsSlamsFresh DropEchoes
LearnWriting TipsPoetry TermsPoets & ArtistsBooksFor Teachers
ExplorePoetry GenomePoem MapEchoesTake ActionGroups
AboutWrite a PoemDonateSign UpLog In

eclipse


How do others expect me to describe you?

How do you describe what growing feels like?

How do you describe what breathing feels like?

How do you describe what being asleep feels like?

These are feelings which all people know well.

Still, they seem quite unexplainable.

 

You are worth more than the vibrations my vocal chords and oxygen I breathe,

To form clumsy sentences that could never depict you quite right.

 

But if I picked a metaphor trying to define you,

You are the sun, shining so persistently,

You are almost ten minutes ahead, always.

I am the moon, cold and modestly quiet.

I am covered in craters, like old puffy scars.

 

No one pictures me differently than

Without your rays glorifying my body each night.

It’d be impossible to see any part of me.

 

Every 18 months,

You sacrifice a few minutes.

You let me pass in front of you.

You get a glimpse of my dark side.

In that moment of privacy from the Earth,

We share our company in a new light with only us.

©All Rights Reserved

Something wrong with this poem?

Submitted to a slam

“Speak Your Mind Scholarship Slam -- CLOSED”

Share

Replies are closed for this poem.

Christina.Bondurant1

"So I began to think maybe it was true that when you were married and had children it was like being brainwashed, and afterward you went about as numb as a slave in some private, totalitarian state." Sylvia Plath

View all poems →

Your Poem's Voice

See what makes your poem unique — its voice, energy, themes, and the literary traditions it draws from.

Comments (0)

No comments yet. Be the first to share your thoughts.

Log in to leave a comment.