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Acrostic

Education : Business For Politician


Faint-hearted, we still choose to vote for them making fair education All the government schools dissolve to establish their business in private ones without any choice Indignant parents watch the state smash a child's dream. Reserved classes get spoon-fed without struggling. Enthusiastic politicians are into money making, Denying kids their basic rights to fuel a rich faction. Unaccounted money sends their children overseas. Condemning statements scream in sharp protest, Attribution awarded to those who pull the curtains to restructure for clarity. Teachers are being arrested for taking the side of their students' needs Institutions are turned into corporate schemes Outraged students voice their anger at this failed system Network trading away an honest child's dream.
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Weekly Challenge: Write a acrostic about something that isn't fair — and why it matters. Constraint: Use at least 3 words from another language.

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Abstract critique of education system with philosophical scope about inequality

SparseMeasureDense

Dense layering of ideas: privatization, corruption, student suffering, systemic failure

DarkSentimentBright

Strongly negative; anger, indignation, outrage permeate throughout

StillEnergyExplosive

Explosive verbs: dissolve, smash, scream, condemning, outraged; sharp protest tone

MicroLengthEpic

13 lines falls in 16-30 range; closer to lower end

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Metaphors present (curtains, corporate schemes); mostly direct declarative statements

LyricVoiceDramatic

Lyric voice with dramatic elements; social commentary mixed with personal outrage

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Comments (1)

kitty97
This really happens everywhere but inspired from failure of education system in india. Hope this poem spread awareness as well as a reality check.

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