Effortless

June 30, 2020

Just as the earth weilds power over the moon in its orbit so effortlessly, so does the soul over the human body. Effortlessly glides into the first breath of a new born, and flies away into the abyss when one blows out their last.

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SpinjanebobJul 1, 2020

Thank you for the comment i shall definitely check yours out.

Annette M VelasquezJul 1, 2020

A thought- provoking message. Clear and honest. Your metaphors are strong and you've effectively expressed a lot in so short a poem.