The Eight Walk
(please imagine 8 in chinese in place of the / \'s, as powerpoetry does not accept chinese characters)
I walked along the shore and left eight prints, all
/ \, / \, / \, / \, / \, / \, / \, / \,
and said it was eight times as lucky.
She said that's not how it works
and kissed me
She walked along the shore and left / \ prints, all
crooked back and shuffling walk,
and queer beauty
and said it was eight times as lucky.
I said that's not how it works
Honey
Darling
Ba-a-a-by
Why do you say these things,
that don't make any sense
and make me want to kiss up on you
besides?
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