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The end of me.


I laid in bed,

I could not write.

I lost my soul,

and lost my mind. 

Now I am so frustrated,

I simply just can not take it. 

Tears streamed down my face every night,

I held on to you so tight.

You betrayed me, and you decieved me.

Suddenly you chose lust so greedily,

I gave you every inch of me.

I showed you love but you could not see,

Not more blind than me I let you hold that knife

That ended everything that I was ever supposed to be.

 

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Comments (13)

JasmineLyn37
<p>This is really amazing, im thankful that you wrote this.</p><p>&nbsp;</p>
itry
<p>Reading this, I felt what you were going through. This is an amazing piece.</p>
Kowareta no iseki
<p>When I read your poem, it feels like something inside you has been cut, and that even though you can&#39;t &#39;write&#39;, you have got&nbsp;to do something to ease the building pain and frustration inside you. I&#39;m not sure if this&nbsp;is how you feel, but I think it might help to remember that anything is possible, good or bad. So . . . look at everything, if that makes any sense.</p>
Mandy25
<p>absolutely beautiful</p><p>&nbsp;</p>
saudade
<p>really good and great way to speak to your audience. you dont know true pain until it hinders your abbility to write.</p>
Brooke Gladney
<p>This is exactly how I&#39;m feeling about a situation in my life. This poem is beautiful.</p>
MilanoCookies
<p>explicitley raw. good job thinking of the perfect words.</p>
Darkfox13
<p>Wow...... That speaks....</p>
GGicefire
<p>It's not the end until it is.</p><p>You can still write.</p><p>The end is far away.</p>
kate.zurovchak
<p>Wow. the emotion you convey is powerful. I know that your struggles will make you a stronger person. No challenge is unconquerable.</p>
lillbit15
<p>definetly beautiful</p>
Oliver Hancock
<p>Be strong dear stranger. What doesn&#39;t kill you makes you stronger. What the world often lacks can be used to go harder. What they don&#39;t know may get them in the end, but for eternity I share joy, my friend.</p>
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
<p>turn this frustration and betrayal to an inspiration that will give you the strength in overcoming heartaches</p><p>this is another great poem-very descriptive and detailed-oriented</p><p>write a poem that brings positive energy</p><p>i want you to open your eyes to a new horizon</p><p>give yourself an opportunity to build off your talent in writing</p><p>i felt the words-imagine if you were to recite this at an open mic event</p><p>keep writing-this is the beginning of your healing process</p>

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