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Endless well of needs


I wish you were here right beside my side while we both watch movies on TV. I begged for your love and devotion, for your affection and for you just to notice my endless well of needs and desires and all that I've ever wanted to require. I'm in the room right below of the giant fears right above me. I'm patient you're learning I'll pretend it's not hurting. All I wish to know undoubtedly is that you only have eyes for me and sit here silently. I'm an anchor in the ocean and you know I could never leave. Some might say it's a virtue to not let good love slip away So, I'll be chill and forgiving and I'll be thankful for what you're giving but nothings quite enough when I know that to get it I begged.
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Katiecreates

Hello fellow readers I'm Katie I love writing poetry and writing stories about small things that terrify me and things that are most important to me I hope you love my poetry and are excited to see more that I have to offer! "Good people go through bad things even when they haven't done anything wrong because that's just how the world is"

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Deeply personal yearning for unreciprocated love and validation from specific person.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple emotional/thematic ideas layered densely; desire, fear, patience, sacrifice intertwined.

DarkSentimentBright

Predominantly melancholic, desperate, unmet need; some self-awareness but overwhelmingly painful.

StillEnergyExplosive

Urgent emotional intensity beneath surface; restrained delivery heightens tension.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 24 lines; falls in 16-30 range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Metaphors (anchor, ocean, room/fears), vivid imagery, symbolic language throughout.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice; raw first-person emotional confession without dramatic distance.

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