entitlement mentality-the sequel

July 9, 2012

entitlement mentality ................ strips your drive strips your ambitions strips your motivation strips your aspiration strips your desire strips your freedom strips your success strips your abundance strips your hunger to be the best instead of taking all these components off like strippers who dance around poles with no class its time to put those components back on better than a dude that gets no ass

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MVP-Most Valuable PoetAug 10, 2012

thanks 4 the support its about creatively enhancing the english language whether the concepts is intellectual, practical, poltical,etc most important thing is how to use the words we choose check out my other poems

jwienerAug 10, 2012

The repetitive use of "strips" is another example of how one word can have have multiple meanings. Here, you use this word in several instances, each making a very powerful statement to enhance your overall message.