equality and power

by Marqi

March 31, 2013

strongest of them all Hear me cry for civil rights knowledge is power

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EunoiaApr 1, 2013

strongest of them all (who? you? for civil rights-- thiis part doesn't work very well, hoever your haiku is for civil rights ery strong, maybe turn into you ownr type of poem in delete the civil rights bit. I know what you can put there so I know there are bit wording out there, it just takes a little search/ nice job though:0

MarqiMar 31, 2013

this piece is difficult because of the restrictions a haiku can have but these restriction allow us to dive deep and let my true self come out quickly