Ethereal

As the rain falls upon the leaves and the soil 
The sound resonates 
The people dance to its rhythm 

The noise of man drowns the sweet sounds and sours
A cacophony
Soils silence with clinks and clanks

To every blade of grass, to every mountain
Screaming perfection
Amazement that never seizes

Man-made machines and the mechanizations
They fall when compared
Imperfect in all ways possible

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RebeccaYSPerez

This poem was very sweet, it was short, and very pleasing to the senses and the imagination. As well, you've taught me a few new words. Thank you so much for sending in this lovely poem!

Rebecca

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