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The Ever-Gorgeous Pink


All around disliked

Belittled and bashed

Too “girly” for most

 
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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-a4305711-7fff-304e-7ad3-3f93c285b1a8"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Stage: Pink being disliked by people. Tone feels serious. </span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-a4305711-7fff-304e-7ad3-3f93c285b1a8"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Language &amp; Lit. Devices: Really great use of words. You could add why you enjoy pink to contrast the whole poem being about how pink is disliked.</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;"><span id="docs-internal-guid-a4305711-7fff-304e-7ad3-3f93c285b1a8"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Arial; background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Structure &amp; Layout: The structure&#39;s great. If you wanted though you could switch bashed and belittled. When you read it out loud I think them being switched packs a bit more punch. It&#39;s great as it is though!</span></span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;">&nbsp;</p>

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