PoemsBrowse PoemsSlamsFresh DropEchoes
LearnWriting TipsPoetry TermsPoets & ArtistsBooksFor Teachers
ExplorePoetry GenomePoem MapEchoesTake ActionGroups
AboutWrite a PoemDonateSign UpLog In
Free Verse

Every year


sparks are fading like every year, celebrate at the place, not far from here you've kissed at midnight turned all talk down, I was tired brides envy how you're easy at doing all that, silence doubt, lift me up and let me rest my head. I take your clothes, button down with your old grey coat. have the empathy, to not make me forget remember the best of me, keep my love sorted see my eyes regret, that I wasn't there before recognize your warm silhouette, you always find ways to show me more
©All Rights Reserved

Something wrong with this poem?

Share

Replies are closed for this poem.

▾ This Poem's Voice

Your Poem's Voice

PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal romantic relationship and intimate moments; some universal longing but grounded in specific experience.

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple distinct ideas layered across poem: fading, celebration, intimacy, doubt, memory, regret, recognition.

DarkSentimentBright

Mixed emotional tone: melancholic regret and fatigue balanced against affection, comfort, and warmth.

StillEnergyExplosive

Subdued, introspective voice with quiet intensity; physical gestures present but delivered softly, not explosively.

MicroLengthEpic

16 lines; falls within 16-30 range, lean toward shorter end of mid-length.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Moderate ornamentation: similes, personification, indirect imagery; some plain declarative moments balance ornament.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Pure lyric internal voice throughout; speaker's thoughts, desires, regrets; no narrative arc or dramatic personas.

How do we analyze poems? →

▸ Artist Match

Comments (1)

BubbaGump
Brides envy... your old gray coat... keep my love sorted... I've read it several times now, and while I'm not quite sure I have the meaning, I can feel it. It's like flannel. It's threadbare and wise. I'll have to come back to it again.

Log in to leave a comment.