Evil subdued

April 29, 2020

Inside innocence is evil subdued Patient and persistent just waiting to be renewed To one's end the other is glued Their contract is of a mutual promise a new round always for an old Feud

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OneofthechosenonesJul 29, 2020

Thank you for your review and comments

Annette M VelasquezApr 29, 2020

Compact, direct, and clear. This poem has the effectiveness of unique rhyme, a philosophical, thought-provoking message and a style that is accessible to all. Truthful and original.