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Expectations


This world has so many expectations

we give and give and give

to possibly get something in return

 

Work ourselves up a ladder

of accomplishments in life

trying to achieve the highest rank

 

But no one is impressed

when they’re bragged about

with that egotistical sly jerk grin

 

Only jealousy cringes our brows

left here making tiny steps

towards our much bigger goals

 

You, high up on your pedestal,

making yourself rise higher

trying to tell us our dreams

of peace and unity

 

As meaningful as a star shinning

in the night sky begging to be wished

upon with only uncertainty of your wish

ever coming true

 

You stand there

saying you’re our leader

bashing down your competitors

showing us just how small and weak

you tell us we are

 

You go inspiring millions

with statements of change

as if you have any control

of this game of wits you created

and stumbled into

 

Are we to follow you in these footsteps?

To me, there’s no surprise,

with examples such as these

getting paid millions to belittle and bully

 

Teaching us life’s a struggle

that to win

you have to come out on top

 

In this contest of popularity

I shall stand aside knowing

these difficulties

aren’t worth the fight

 

Nor do I have the dying urge

to sit upon your royal throne

withstanding the stress

of holding up your image

 

So, I’ll remain, here,

in the shadows and let you

stand on in the shimmering spotlight

 

Because to us, your followers

in this naïve and overly cruel world

You meet all the required expectations

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Comments (4)

QV
<p>Charming piece :) &nbsp;I wonder about the "you" chosen in this piece, generic or specific? Since the initial subject of the work is "This world", are you refering to a person who embodies these attributes? Another thought readers may have is "what are these expectations?" I suggest perhaps showing the readers what statments such as "[t]eaching us life is a struggle" are instead of making declarations that may limit the true effectiveness of your piece. Q.V.&nbsp;</p>
marie
Love it! It's definitely easier on the eyes/to read. Your work is so amazing. Keep it up :)
justnot2normal
I have gone back and revised it a bit with line breaks. Let me know if you think it is stronger this way, as you thought it would be. Thank you so much for the suggestion and thank you, poetry is my release of emotion, I just let it flow.
marie
I'd love to hear this performed aloud--it is really powerful, and builds. I think it would be stronger with more line breaks, though. Please keep posting. Your work is great!

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