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Katiecreates
Hello fellow readers I'm Katie I love writing poetry and writing stories about small things that terrify me and things that are most important to me I hope you love my poetry and are excited to see more that I have to offer! "Good people go through bad things even when they haven't done anything wrong because that's just how the world is"
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Personal introspection on life struggles, minimally abstract philosophical reflection.
Multiple ideas per section: expectations, healing, emotional repression, unfulfilled dreams.
Predominantly negative: self-criticism, exhaustion, sadness, unmet desires dominate.
Moderate intensity with phrases like 'sick and tired' balanced by contemplative pacing.
Four substantial lines/sections, approximately 16-20 logical units total.
Minimal figurative language; mostly declarative statements with slight personification in 'haunt me.'
Pure lyric introspection; direct first-person emotional voice, no narrative or dramatic shift.
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