Fairy Tale

by Lovepoems

April 13, 2019

Open the eyes

the person looked into the...void,

which it was glowing brightly against the earth.

Why the brightest light on earth or was it not?

The person looked deeper into it.

He or she couldn't figure it out just yet.

Whatever that was in front of his or her eyes, it would be...

Not so great ending...

Closed eyes

the person shook, where he or she was feeling uncomfortable

like... someone was there.

But how?

He or she heard the chuckle and the movement of something...

or somewhat harrassing?

Eyes opened this time

he or she found an unexpected visitor in the bedroom

Not good.

Someone just staring into his or her eyes.

What a beautiful sight of being? he thought or someone thought.

And he smiled while the person looked away to the glowing thing on the horizon.

The bad ending...

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LovepoemsJan 11, 2022

The character either a male or a female, age unknown, found the glowing thing was not the hopeful moment to look at,rather found a consequence for coming towards it. The character was looking at the imaginative side way too long, so the glowing thing was the reality that hitthe character's brain to be real. Similar to Connie the character was meeting theguy, who had weird outfits and wig was driving a car with his friend parked outsideof her house. The guy was her enemy or the reality that she cannot see throughouther life, but it was there in front of her eyes expressing "you cannot run, youcannot hide, face me".      Fairy tale always have a happy ending. In this story, that was not the case,it appeared that the character was having the worst moments for the first timein the eyes of a stranger or the man. When reading the before comments, that would add up to the meaning of being stuck and cannot run from the result inlife.