Fall

by Gary101

September 25, 2012

Fresh green leaf turn red The hot air turn slightly cold Fall is coming soon

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samueltfranklinSep 26, 2012

A nice haiku structure. I like how you work with dualism in the first two lines: green and red, hot and cold. It very simply underscores autumn's liminality.