Fallen Dizzy
You close your eyes a feeling starts,
Youre mind goes blank,
It's so bazar,
You feel like you will fall apart,
Your knees are weak and you see stars,
The spinning world seams oh so far,
As everything tilts and the light goes dark,
When you hit the floor like broken shards you lie there still and unconscious.
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