Falling into Darkness

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37862
United States
35° 46' 11.7372" N, 83° 39' 22.0392" W

Falling slowly as time does pass
All my problems seem to amass
Into some great raging abomination
Overtaking me with dark sensation

Sitting alone, I'm waiting and crying
I no longer feel the need for trying
What is the point, to what ultimate cause
Always it seems into darkness I fall

My final calling, I embrace the warm
But between the worlds, my soul is torn
My constant struggle for a place to be
For my darkness wasn't easy to see

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savigirl14

Wow. This poem is very emotional but simple. Please read my poems and tell me what you think

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