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Falling Through Hell


I’m falling through hell

Here we go again

I’m chilled to the bone

In a world of eighteen thousand degrees

 

I’m falling away

One last look at that darkening sky

Wish I could have said goodbye

Yet I still wonder why

 

What made the floor drop beneath me

Sending me further and further away

From where I was meant to stay

In the arms of those I loved

And amongst those who cared

About whether I lived or died

Did no one wonder why?

 

So here I am… alone

Falling through the depths of hell

Will I see them again?

 

It’s dark once more

The fire’s finally gone

But what’s left in its place is worse

Since it was all I had

And now I’m here alone

Just me, myself, and I

No longer with the sky

 

A few tears caress my face

But I brush them all away

What use do tears have for me

When I’m falling through hell?

 

A light opens from above

Offering warmth that comforts and consoles

I’m no longer falling through hell

Hell’s now falling through me

 

I leave it carrying with me a threat

That it’ll be back for me another day

To finally tear me apart

Until I’m too far gone to save

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Lokiva

I am an eighteen year old writer and I enjoy writing poetry and novels, sometimes short stories. I write poetry because, for me, it is a way to express my feelings without actually expressing them in spoken word. So if I'm upset, I don't say that I'm upset, or even write that I'm upset, instead, I write about the overall feeling that I am containing at the time.

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Lokiva
<p>Hey there, just wanted to let everyone know that my poem here can also be found on deviant art under my username there ForeverEryn.</p><p>It is my original work (of course), but I posted it on there first a couple of months ago.</p>

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