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Fallowing Your Heart


Fallowing Your Heart Nicole M. Maldonado As I lay on the ground Feeling like a princess being crowned I meditated about the song Which for long I felt it belong Shortly after, all went wrong Just when I stood And laid my hand as I could A hot breeze came Just there after, I only felt the flame What then lead me to shame My skin was not pretty But God gave me a man who had pity Shortly after we got married And as any other weeding I was carried The song came back to my mind But very much refined As I wrote it, my heart was tore apart But that didn't hold me from following my heart I will always write songs until the day I depart.
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TayJaeThorn
Lead- led Fallowing- Following Weeding- Wedding Tore- Torn * This isn’t a spelling mistake; I just think the latter sounds better. But that’s a personally opinion, and as I wasn’t the one who wrote it, doesn’t really stand. Just thought I would throw that out there though :).
nniiccoollee
Can you point them for me so I can improve
TayJaeThorn
Cute poem, but there were quite a lot of distracting spelling mistakes.

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