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Self Destruction


Every Day Is Rough Forced To Live A Lie, As The Queen Of Deceit Forges Another War Within Every Blink Of An Eye. Ya Try To Stand Against This Oppression, But It Just Spawns More Deception. The Worst Is To Herself With Her Own Internal Affliction. Yet If She'd Just Stand Down For 1 Second & Listen To This Prediction. Instead Of Letting Go Of The Self Induced Ego That Brings This Masochistic Destruction To A Family Tryna Function. Without All The Outside Sources Feeding This Disruption By Adding Distortion To The Facts Instead Of Aborting The Lies Of Catastrophic Proportions
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My Name Is Joe Lilley w/ The Alias Levi DiVine. I'm A Musician, Poet and Lyricist,

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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal family conflict, concrete autobiographical focus, minimal abstraction

SparseMeasureDense

Multiple complex ideas per 10 lines: deceit, oppression, ego, family dysfunction

DarkSentimentBright

Strongly negative: suffering, lies, destruction, affliction, masochism throughout

StillEnergyExplosive

Aggressive language, accusatory tone, rapid idea shifts, intense emotional charge

MicroLengthEpic

17 lines falls in 16-30 range

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Metaphors (Queen of Deceit, war within), personification, some ornamentation moderate

LyricVoiceDramatic

Primarily lyric internal voice with some accusatory address to 'she/her'

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