Self Destruction
Every Day Is Rough Forced To Live A Lie,
As The Queen Of Deceit Forges Another War
Within Every Blink Of An Eye.
Ya Try To Stand Against This Oppression,
But It Just Spawns More Deception.
The Worst Is To Herself With Her Own Internal Affliction.
Yet If She'd Just Stand Down For 1 Second
& Listen To This Prediction.
Instead Of Letting Go Of The Self Induced Ego
That Brings This Masochistic Destruction
To A Family Tryna Function.
Without All The Outside Sources Feeding This Disruption
By Adding Distortion To The Facts
Instead Of Aborting The Lies Of Catastrophic Proportions
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▾ This Poem's Voice
Your Poem's Voice
PersonalThemeAbstract
Personal family conflict, concrete autobiographical focus, minimal abstraction
SparseMeasureDense
Multiple complex ideas per 10 lines: deceit, oppression, ego, family dysfunction
DarkSentimentBright
Strongly negative: suffering, lies, destruction, affliction, masochism throughout
StillEnergyExplosive
Aggressive language, accusatory tone, rapid idea shifts, intense emotional charge
MicroLengthEpic
17 lines falls in 16-30 range
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Metaphors (Queen of Deceit, war within), personification, some ornamentation moderate
LyricVoiceDramatic
Primarily lyric internal voice with some accusatory address to 'she/her'
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