PoemsBrowse PoemsSlamsFresh DropEchoes
LearnWriting TipsPoetry TermsPoets & ArtistsBooksFor Teachers
ExplorePoetry GenomePoem MapEchoesTake ActionGroups
AboutWrite a PoemDonateSign UpLog In

Family First


Father you leave

But I have not been fed

Mother you too leave

But you have not given me a hug to keep me warm

 

Father you have gone to feed another family 

But I am still here starving

Mother you have gone to warm another family

But I am still here freezing 

 

Father you have came back

But the reaper has already fed me

Mother you have come back

But the cold got to my heart before your sweet warmth

 

Father and mother

You always say family first 

But which family do you mean?

 

(Related to “MY People” ) Comment and share please!!

©All Rights Reserved

Something wrong with this poem?

Share

Replies are closed for this poem.

Nate’s_the_name25

Before I began writing, I was someone other than myself. Writing is my way to be me and put my world in words. Through this site, I hope that I can grow as a writer and hopefully be known in the writing community one day. That said, if you like my writing please share my work and help me out, thank you! Also, if you ever want to contact me, my email is [email protected]. Don’t be shy, email me; tell me something about one of my poems, maybe tell me your favorite one or least favorite, anything!! I want to improve as a writer so I love all constructive criticism and compliments too of course. Have a good day!

View all poems →

Your Poem's Voice

See what makes your poem unique — its voice, energy, themes, and the literary traditions it draws from.

Comments (0)

No comments yet. Be the first to share your thoughts.

Log in to leave a comment.