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A Fantasy Dream


He touches her hand, I watch as they get close; I wish it was us, for now I sit alone. He wraps around her, holding her tight; The slightest breeze, gives me the coldest chill I look to the sky wondering if you look upon the stars as I do. Or perhaps you’re dreaming of you, a heroic knight, rescuing your fair maiden. As the shiver escapes me, reality awakens me returning me to the romantic cuddly couple’s scene . But, I beckon to the night, to become hidden in its covers, to allow my eyes to fall onto my own fantasy dream.
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samueltfranklin
While the subject matter is pretty universal, there are some great-quality lines in here. May favorite: "But, I beckon to the night, to become hidden in its covers." There's sort of a classical/antiquated feel to the word "become," which lends it a nostalgic air, and comparing the night to a bed strongly underscores the romantic feel of the poem.

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