As Far Away

July 14, 2015

I laid on the ground

because I couldn't breathe

I had ran

as far away from nothing as I could

But you're still inside me

I let the rain hit my face

because I couldn't feel it

I couldn't feel anything

I couldn't breathe

So I laid on the ground.

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