Fascination

Sun, 01/04/2015 - 11:36 -- nxclx

Location

90065
United States
34° 6' 31.86" N, 118° 13' 24.3228" W

A rough grinding sound;

A quick, quiet pop;

It dances in the wind.

 

A smell most would reject;

A power all should fear;

It captures my gaze.

 

A release of the trigger;

A small puff of smoke;

It is gone.

 

A wandering mind;

A replaced thumb;

It starts.

 

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