Fat or Thin

July 28, 2012

You call me fat you call me thin, these are but a few problems within. I'm nice to you no matter what but you treat me like you want me shot. You punch me and kick me, either way I'm still there day by day. I'm older now I can see it, you thought you were good in front of all your you stood. Then that day came were I had taken enough and decided it was time to get rough. It was not my way but it helped to relieve the scars of the years. Bullying should never be countered by violence but behind there stupid Ego is still a kid that asks 'were did he go?'.

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The_SoldierJakFeb 2, 2013

Massive thanks for the positive feedback. It means a lot and it'll help me go a long way in writing in the future :)

TieeeeshAug 6, 2012

I love the way you showed how the things people say can affect others, especially when their teased, because of their size n how it all effects the way you see yourself....definitelyy something a lot of people can relate to

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jacksonpoetry5Jul 28, 2012

Your poem expressed heart felt emotion in every word you wrote. Body image(whether you are big or thin) is a tough issue to deal with in our society and it proves to be even tougher for indivduals that get bullied for being a certain size. Great Poem!!!!!!!! And keep writing!!!!!!!