The Father
The years were spent shedding tears.
A man always present, her father
commanded the family with his cane.
A poor judgment call turned an injury
into a fight for constant approval
from a girl he called his daughter.
Shy and easily taken down, the daughter
spent her hours wiping tears
from her cheeks. Wanting approval
and love from a father
with an injury
that was constantly enforced by a cane.
With one swipe the cane
brought everything crashing down on the daughter.
The back, central to his body, caused by an injury
that without tears
made the father
God, able to abuse approval.
How could approval
be dictated by a cane?
The angry man, the father
is supposed to love his daughter,
but instead brought tears
to her eyes over an exaggerated injury.
Every mistake, every injury
does not need appraisal or approval.
Uncontrolled tears
fell from her face onto the cane.
The innocence of the daughter
had been broken by the father.
An evil tone had taken over the father.
His simple yet complex injury
brought his little girl, his daughter
to agony, constantly looking for approval.
The father did not care, his cane
commanded nothing but tears.
He took the simple concept of approval
crashing down with his cane
and in return received an excess amount of painful tears.
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