in fear

Sat, 10/07/2017 - 19:22 -- Itzel20

The darkness took all, even your white heart

The shadows whispered to me the sorrow of your rhythm

The deepness of your eyes made me cry next to you

I saw you floating to the farthest galaxy

A galaxy full of eternal souls

Your heart beat knew how to impress me in a dreadful way.

One, two, three, I started the countdown

And because I love you I laid down in the cold floor next to you.

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