Feeling the Rythm

November 3, 2012

My dance instructor, so cool so fresh My heart racing as I am put to the test Stepping to every sound, feeling every beat Making sure that I accomplish an amazing feat Though tough times he is always there Together my pain we share Bringing me into the light, making me see Just how important is he We move back and forth, left to right He is an inspiration even until the end of night.

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jt504Nov 3, 2012

This was a fun writing assignment. I have an amazing dance instructor who has brought me into the world of dancing. I dance everyday for at least an hour. I really feel that dancing is as important as water to me. My passion for dancing derives from my instructor who has taught me how dancing and expressing myself can make me more happy. It is good to express yourself and tell the world just what you are made of and how you are different from somebody else. Thank you for reading my poem, I hope you enjoyed it.