Felodese - by Essence Vizl

Come back to the dark my love

“It’s brighter than it looks down here”

All alone consumed by fears

I'm drowning myself in forlorn tears

 

I’ll try my best to compensate

Don’t leave me in this awful state

I’m getting high and feeling low

The end is near for i'm breathing slow-

 

A broken heart hanging from a thread

Perturbation, a precedent stead

faint reminiscence timelessly bled

as crimson petals fell from forth her head

 

Time stopped still and winter froze,

The snow remained upon her nose

As the cold kissed her porcelain toes

Lying prostrate as a scarlet rose

 

Farewell, felodese

 

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