Final Promenade
A human always needs pure oxygen
Forever I desire my mom’s love
Swift streams of open air, life’s origin
My mom’s warm touch keeps me a flying dove
A mortal cautiously sees finite breath
Affection leaves in silent treachery
Appearing endless but expunged by death
Please mom don’t go! I’ll choke in misery
I cannot live without you dear mama
You cultivate my passion and success
Vanish, my soul will decay with trauma
A life of darkness, but now I confess
I was a selfish leech exploiting care
Now I am older with a grateful heart
My stubborn youth is obsolete and bare
Dream a new dawn; never we will depart
You galvanize me to breathe fortitude
In heaven, we will hug in gratitude
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