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Finally Not the Minority


Majority, I'm finally the minority, no matter how old, aren't sorry for what they did, I was no different back then, they're only sorry you won't forget it, yet, it's in jest, them still upset it don't matter if you're a CEO, work for Dominos, Spinatos, Hollywood Video, Hollyhood criminal, living in a mobile home or have no home because access to one's soul is a privilege no free visit, respect is equal people not ranked how individuals lives, one's peace needs to be protected practice patience, the calmer you are the smarter you'll think before an irrational action is lived, purposely constantly being disrespectful and not considerate to a self committed favor means evil karma may be subjected, Lord's will, Fuck Israel (fake 1948 state) and I've learned that forgiveness is not about excusing what you and I did, and real shit, nothing makes me snap more than this, which is being intentionally disrespected the Holy Spirit and I have invested unlimited compassion to those we know who are not saved/i will never have expectations forever more, I live by standards that will not change there's so much love left in me but nowhere safe to put it anymore besides my Lord, so confirmation is biased whomever finds it, and that's NOT a " hot take" sometimes peace requires silence even when you know you are correct, studied The Art of War & my Lord, so i know revenge is best served as a cold dish and yet you gave me a hot plate 😊 it's okay so let's bow our heads and say grace...... At any early age, I used to say that I reached a point where I can't respect certain people anymore and I wasn't talking about the ones who never paid me back the cash but came through the door when it was time to go to war I thank the Lord to see a new day but my soul says, the sun does not rise to ask what I failed yesterday to finish? it offers me another chance to change or begin and finish the mission without willingly to sin plus give unlimited compassion for any foe or friend everything happens for a reason, the people who came in that became kin, the one's who came in to just eat and leave the dish, none of this is random, every moment carries a lesson but it's up to you and I, maybe in time soon, to understand and comprehend the blessings in the message.... It's a beautiful day.
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PersonalThemeAbstract

Personal spiritual journey grounded in autobiographical experience and reflection

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Multiple philosophical ideas densely packed with rapid thematic shifts throughout

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Mixed: anger/frustration balanced with forgiveness, compassion, and spiritual acceptance

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Intense, confrontational voice with explosive moments tempered by meditative passages

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Approximately 65+ lines across multiple stanzas, approaching extended piece

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Metaphors, personification, and symbolic language woven throughout with some declarative moments

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Pure lyric internal voice; introspective first-person confession and spiritual meditation

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