The First Best Day of My Life

April 28, 2021

My path home is dangerous and unclear, A sense of peril within me feels like an end, Surely there must be more than this, Violently, forcefully, I battle forward, I am keenly aware of a distant light, I am drawn to it, it’s true, go to the light, A new, vibrant hope has me in its grip, I feel my journey out of darkness is nearing its end, I am free! Strangely I have no memories, bright light is all around me, I scream and fight, only I emerge, “The first best day of my life", I have no fear, I feel love for the very first time, my future is unwritten, I am perfect, I am ALL good. The day is mine, I am here.

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Terrance Longtin

I'm 62 years old, I am married, I am an artist, I do abstract paintings and sell them locally and on Etsy in Terrance Gallery. I have had 23 major surgeries on my legs, recently Nov 9, Jan 11 and the next one in April. So I have a full leg cast from Nov 9 thru June 28 so I wrote a children's book which has been published and released to the public March 13, 2021. Also I kind of got interested in writing free verse poetry and I have written five so far. I love my cats and my 14 yr old grandson. I'm married to the absolute best wife ever! One of my tattoos is on my forearm, it's from a free verse poem by Walt Whitman called "Song of the Open Road" it's 15 pages long but well worth reading. My tattoo says "all seems beautiful to me" and there's a Chinese symbol for beauty at the end. Walt Whitman is known as the father of free verse poetry. I actually wrote a free verse poem about myself, which I really like.

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