First Time

by maikyporca

February 12, 2014

Your eyes are bright like starlight,

Your lips are hot like chestnuts,

I find this feeling so fine,

I'm in love for the first time.

I said, "hi" and you replied,

My heart jumped as high as tide;

I just smiled, I'm such a jerk,

Miley said, "Come on, let's twerk".

Everytime I think of you,

I see hue, so beautiful;

When you smile, you ease my pain,

It's so warm, it's like caffeine.

I can feel it but you don't,

I wanted it but you won't;

Now, I can feel what they mean,

I'm in love but you were mean.

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Junia NoelJul 22, 2017

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