the five seasons

Location

10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

you have the winter, the spring, the summer, and the fall right.........
nobody ever talks about the 5th season-the killing season
its the season of a dead body in their own home
its the season of a young boy hanging himself in his room because he was bully
its the season that a baby daddy puts a bullet in his head after he shot his wife and kid
its the season where certain neighborhoods look like a ghost town
its the season where people fight over a seat in a train
its the season where girls fight over a boy in which he is moving on the next chick
its not the season to be next to a drug dealer name lolli, its the season to live full of jolly

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samueltfranklin

Identifying what might be described as humanity's inherent penchant for violence as a seasonal occurrence is an interesting idea. I'd be interested to see how you might further develop this idea beyond this poem, although this is a very worthy poem in its own right. Keep it up!

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

this is a worthy poem ........it defines life in my eyes from all angles
i like to keep up with current events and dissect all information, but i like the thought that you would like for me to go further than the poem itself
this is an eye opener for all of us to pay a close attention to
check out my other poems

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