folly was these three (and songs)
I. exposition
in the beginning,
you flipped pages, turnstile fingers
stopping twisted words.
you gave them no power
because you had seen their sway
on other people
and you were determined not to let them be
you.
you found new ways to speak,
tiny speck of matter, your
Genesis
and you called this love,
and you didn't know any better
because when you looked up,
you were alone.
II. rising action
me: no use crying over spilled chickens.
you: I think you're mixing up your baskets.
me: do you want me to?
you: what if I told you lies?
me: you were not supposed to have use for them.
you: then why are you here?
there are too many questions
for you to answer
and some of them are your own.
III. climax
syrup poured from your mouth
I watched as the ants found it
and devoured your face.
you grinned, gaping cheeks,
you spilled coffee into the
hissing radiator
and told me it would not
bother you anymore.
you leapt onto a train rushing
from a station
and you were surprised
to find a shock as you scrambled
for purchase, feet dangling,
all those stupid signs
and you had thought they
did not matter.
you stood before sharp glass,
eyes raking yourself.
you liked this image and
you held it in case someone
was looking.
you flew, feet spinning
furiously.
you fell.
IV. falling action
I mixed us up
you knew that already.
I saw a woman with a
floppy hat cross sunlit gravel
and I looked for ways
to hide.
you existed in some sense
and I know this because
I watched the ground rush
into you
and you pulled a little cable.
someone came running
and that was when I stopped
being you.
V. resolution
what can you say?
three walls do not a shelter make
but everyone who has done
what you have done
could not be sleeping in alleys
and after all, you hurt no one.
did you hurt someone?
a name is drifting in a muddy pond
but you cannot ruin your
new yellow boots
just to jump in and find it.
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