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folly was these three (and songs)


I. exposition

 

in the beginning,

you flipped pages, turnstile fingers

stopping twisted words.

 

you gave them no power

because you had seen their sway

on other people

and you were determined not to let them be

 

you.

 

you found new ways to speak,

tiny speck of matter, your

Genesis

and you called this love,

and you didn't know any better

 

because when you looked up,

you were alone.

 

II. rising action

 

me: no use crying over spilled chickens.

 

you: I think you're mixing up your baskets.

 

me: do you want me to?

 

you: what if I told you lies?

 

me: you were not supposed to have use for them.

 

you: then why are you here?

 

there are too many questions

for you to answer

and some of them are your own.

 

III. climax

 

syrup poured from your mouth

I watched as the ants found it

and devoured your face.

 

you grinned, gaping cheeks,

you spilled coffee into the

hissing radiator

and told me it would not

bother you anymore.

 

you leapt onto a train rushing

from a station

and you were surprised

to find a shock as you scrambled

for purchase, feet dangling,

 

all those stupid signs

and you had thought they

did not matter.

 

you stood before sharp glass,

eyes raking yourself.

you liked this image and

you held it in case someone

was looking.

 

you flew, feet spinning

furiously.

 

you fell.

 

IV. falling action

 

I mixed us up

 

you knew that already.

I saw a woman with a

floppy hat cross sunlit gravel

and I looked for ways

to hide.

 

you existed in some sense

and I know this because

I watched the ground rush

into you

 

and you pulled a little cable.

 

someone came running

and that was when I stopped

being you.

 

V. resolution

 

what can you say?

three walls do not a shelter make

 

but everyone who has done

what you have done

could not be sleeping in alleys

 

and after all, you hurt no one.

did you hurt someone?

 

a name is drifting in a muddy pond

but you cannot ruin your

new yellow boots

just to jump in and find it.

 

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