Footprints in time!
Old people passby
New people getby
Never in this world- everything is lasting
Just go by the flow
You get to know- no one is true
Not even you- not even Him!
Heart-stroke mind bleeds.
Why I don't know
Every road I've planned
dissolved into another
Nothing- not even a thing- is
lasting in this impermanent realm
So, go by the flow-
no what matter what
life always know where you wanna be
Use what you have- always
at the very moment !
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PersonalThemeAbstract
Blends personal struggle with universal philosophical meditation on impermanence.
SparseMeasureDense
Multiple ideas densely packed: transience, authenticity, acceptance, existential doubt across lines.
DarkSentimentBright
Predominantly negative/melancholic (despair, disillusion) with minimal redemptive acceptance ending.
StillEnergyExplosive
Fluctuates between anxious intensity and meditative drift; exclamation marks add urgency.
MicroLengthEpic
Approximately 19 lines; falls within 16-30 range.
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Some personification (heart-stroke, life knows) and metaphor (flow); mostly declarative/plain speech.
LyricVoiceDramatic
Pure lyric internal voice; introspective reflection without narrative or dramatic persona shifts.
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