Forever and ever?
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Katiecreates
Hello fellow readers I'm Katie I love writing poetry and writing stories about small things that terrify me and things that are most important to me I hope you love my poetry and are excited to see more that I have to offer! "Good people go through bad things even when they haven't done anything wrong because that's just how the world is"
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Deeply personal longing for a specific lost relationship; autobiographical heartbreak.
Sparse ideas across 11 lines; meditative repetition of waiting and hope.
Melancholic yearning; hopeful but fundamentally sorrowful and resigned tone.
Quiet, still voice; introspective waiting rather than kinetic movement.
11 lines total; falls in 7-15 range (score 3-4, closer to 4).
Limited metaphor (shadow tracing); mostly direct emotional declaration.
Pure lyric internal voice; intimate first-person meditation on absence.
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