Forever Mine

April 9, 2015

Forever Mine

“I don’t like dancing

and flowers die,

but bring me chocolates,

red ribbon tied,

and say ‘I love you’

every Valentine’s,

you just might be

forever mine.”

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Comments (2)

TheParadoxicalCatMay 14, 2015

<p>Thank you! I really appreciate your comment!</p>

Joelsoul22May 14, 2015

<p>i like this poem it's very eloquent, and sophisticated, in how simple it seems. just a brilliant piece!</p>