Forgiveness
I sentenced you to the flames of deep hell.
Deeper than the core of many planets.
I pushed you down the deepest, darkest well.
I crushed you by the forces of granite.
I summoned you to the depths of the sea.
You float, lifeless across the Atlantic.
I showed no mercy; You never showed me.
I wanted to be in love, romantic.
I set you on fire, burned you alive.
You screamed and pleaded for my forgiveness.
How could I forgive if I could not thrive?
I was angry and you were the witness.
Yet, I gathered the strength to forgive you.
Forgiveness, the eventual breakthrough.
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Personal betrayal and forgiveness within relationship conflict.
Dense emotional and narrative ideas compressed into 14 lines.
Negative anguish dominates; redemptive forgiveness ending provides slight lift.
Violent imagery and explosive verbs create intense kinetic force throughout.
14 lines falls within sonnet range, mid-length poem.
Metaphors of hell, flames, depths dominate; ornate symbolic language.
Pure lyric internal voice; confessional first-person throughout.
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