Found Poetry (Starting line taken from Snow Falling On Cedars By David Guterson)
Not even a flicker of the eyes
towards the snow's demise.
The trees outside
to the dark, deep skies.
A wind from the sea brought upon me
snow flakes, mealting from the heat
this will drudge upon a quick defeat.
From the beat of my heart
to the sweat upon my brow
I fell upon my knees
finding no air to breath,
my heart went still
since I felt a chill
from the chatter carried from upon the hill.
This moment so strong
this snow belongs
to show the coldness inside me.
Before I fell ill
I noticed no chill
because of the friend beside me.
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