Fragile

by ElioTheRodent

April 25, 2023

She is fragile.

Not fragile like a flower,

But fragile like a bomb.

Fragile like broken glass,

Scattered along the floorboards.

Be careless with her,

But too careless and she'll cut you.

Too careless and she'll ll blow up in your face.

Too careless and she'll shatter into a thousand pieces

She is fragile, so do not be careless

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Lillian MclemoreApr 25, 2023

Advise from me to you. Put your poem into "Poem form" I may of changed a few small details, if you want you can keep those and claim them as your own, if not thats perfectly fine, just take this writing style into consideration. But this is a really good poem :)She is fragileNot fragile like a flower, but fragile like a bombFragile like broken glassScatterd along the floor boardsBe careless with herNot too carelessTo carelessand she'll shater into a thousand piecesShe is fragileDo not be careless