Fragility

Thu, 02/21/2013 - 17:21 -- Zhenjai

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12866
United States
43° 5' 47.1876" N, 73° 43' 27.2964" W

Flowing heavy rains are occasional
an eruption of tears
3.5 million gallons of partially treated sewage result
fed up with lies
Emotional creatures we are,
the human heart bolted shut
so compact, limited
to prevent forces
rushing up through the ground
Improving day by day
an act of kindness
never goes unnoticed
never forgotten

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