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Freddie Oversteengen


Freddie Oversteegen A brave child, Turned Brave woman To fight for country Is courage wrapped in silence Or sometimes in flirtatious words A bullet from a bike, A pamphlet of hate A start to something loud Quiet Which was it A family hidden A nation torn Men who’d touch a teen They deserved it To see blood drip from split skulls Innate horror incarnate Fear- loud, quiet A quickening of breath Why can't I breathe Is that what you felt When you watched the first body fall Disgust, fear What's happening It’s loud, quiet silence Or was it a sick satisfaction Is it sick? They deserved it Didn’t they? What did I just do Dead they’re dead It was necessary I hope.
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PersonalThemeAbstract

Blends personal/historical with philosophical moral questions on violence

SparseMeasureDense

Dense rapid shifts between narrative, questions, sensory details per 10 lines

DarkSentimentBright

Overwhelmingly dark: death, horror, moral dread, conflicted guilt

StillEnergyExplosive

Fragmented syntax, urgent questions, visceral imagery create high kinetic tension

MicroLengthEpic

39 lines; falls in 31-60 range

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Metaphor (courage wrapped), personification (fear loud/quiet), vivid imagery, restrained ornamentation

LyricVoiceDramatic

Lyric voice addressing historical figure; questions blur internal reflection with dramatic address

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