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Freedom


Just another word for nothing more to lose,

when expectation went for another cruise.

Problems mingle with the small routine,

chained to circumstances all foreseen.

The dream of other shores so indulgent,

seeming liberation when ifs are urgent.

Choice of independence treasure,

hidden potential and its measure.

To serve or to be served in question,

characters and some act of digestion.

The free will and action unimpeded,

or moral responsibilities just proceeded.

Blasphemy and rejection of grace,

conscious control emerge to face.

Determination in advance,

destiny and her eternal dance.

Ego’s possibilities worth creating,

free impressions that keep waiting.

Quantum randomness to the point,

or fate versus free will God anoint.

Freedom from fear and only prison,

whispers for the right decision.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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https://robertrittel.blogspot.com Living virtualistic through myself. The road I wanted to follow choose me and I can see the cosmos to know itself. I remember only moments where my actions manifested the belief of my passion, choosing my next universe through what I have learned in this one. My fears got lost in dreams, sensing what needed to be done with no thinking. I believe in fairy tales, especially with dragons and how to tame them. I do not need any strange faith to worship that celestial brilliance. Dismissing everything what insults my soul and faithful in those small things, because it is in them where our strength is.

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