Freedom Fires versus Oppressive Storms
Lush,
Green leaves glisten
With the sweet scent of mourning dew,
Kept refreshed by the nightly rain.
The expansive clouds
Watching over their Garden
Uniformed and
Perfectly trimmed
From above the clouds watch
As the their showers supply the growth
As they keep the trees in line
Trees always trimmed
Always perfect
Always systematic
A/ways organized
Always in borders
However
As the leaves die
Falling to the ground
Disregarded be the clouds
A mistake on their part
Years past
The leaves dried
They crack and break
Fuel for the inevitable fire: growing
The clouds have built confidence
They have grown large
And black as midnight
Ready to bring their massive downpour
Strike
Lightening shoots down
Like a blazing rod of limelight
Giving purpose the brush
The spark has fallenupon the leaves
Quickly a fire explodes with scalding heat
Consuming the garden
Devouring all in its path
The clouds are enraged
Showering bullets of water to the fire
But to no avail
The flames engulf the garden
And burn free
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