Freedom Or Feel Like Scum
The perfect society knows the balancing
Between allowing
Order and chaos flowing
And ever growing.
However, without free will always apparent
Deadly would become having a nagging parent
And impossible would become paying the rent
For one would be to bent
To see from where life was sent
And to whom life must be lent.
When people never do die
They always reach for the skies
Always neglecting to buy
The irrefutable lie.
When people never do have life
They don't make it through all the strife
And they never notice the knife
Behind the perfect, yet in distress wife.
A country fails when citizens cannot dance
In such a way to forget all about stance.
Beyond words like that
In order to swing the best ball with the bat
One must notice the rats
Under the mat.
Again, when anything is unnoticed
There is a risk.
And when anything is denied through expectations
None can be rightly courageous.
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