The Fruits of Victory
A sky once blue turned black
By soldiers who wear badges of honor on their backs.
Fiberglass rain ceasing weak heartbeats
And staining dark red on cracked concrete.
The ocean across where birds chirp,
You’ll find drones humming, flying under
The watchful sun that knows no borders
But sees the tortures of tyrannous warders.
Mr. Prime Minister, what do you regret more?
Killing too many?
Or not having killed enough?
Mr. Prime Minister, what keeps your stomach full?
Billionaire dollars?
Or the blood of hungry children
And their weeping mothers?
Journalists from all over,
Cameras broadcasting the truth,
Up on the mountain,
Big Brother is watching.
Within all the rotten,
The young have forgotten
The sweet taste of an apple,
Once so abundant,
But famine overflows like a flood,
Followed by rumbling earthquakes of hunger.
Within all the rotten,
The old have forgotten
The rustle of peach trees
That will never die,
Captured proudly in family photographs,
Buried under gray rubble.
“Land of the free”
And home to the wealthy.
White meant purity, now, supremacy.
Oppression disguised as opportunity.
A glittering star for every cratered country.
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Philosophical/political critique of war, imperialism, systemic oppression with abstract moral questioning.
Dense stanzas with multiple ideas: violence, surveillance, famine, political hypocrisy compressed throughout.
Overwhelmingly negative: death, suffering, oppression, corruption, loss, hunger dominate emotional landscape.
Explosive accusations, sharp interrogatives, vivid violent imagery creates high kinetic intensity and urgency.
Approximately 50+ lines across multiple stanzas; falls in extended lyric-protest range.
Rich metaphors (sky darkened, fiberglass rain, famine flood), personification (sun watches), layered symbolism throughout.
Primarily lyric voice with dramatic shift to direct accusatory address of Prime Minister; mostly internal.
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