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The Fruits of Victory


A sky once blue turned black

By soldiers who wear badges of honor on their backs.

 

Fiberglass rain ceasing weak heartbeats 

And staining dark red on cracked concrete. 

 

The ocean across where birds chirp, 

You’ll find drones humming, flying under 

The watchful sun that knows no borders 

But sees the tortures of tyrannous warders. 

 

Mr. Prime Minister, what do you regret more?

Killing too many?

Or not having killed enough?

Mr. Prime Minister, what keeps your stomach full?

Billionaire dollars?

Or the blood of hungry children 

And their weeping mothers? 

 

Journalists from all over, 

Cameras broadcasting the truth, 

Up on the mountain, 

Big Brother is watching. 

 

Within all the rotten, 

The young have forgotten 

The sweet taste of an apple,

Once so abundant,

But famine overflows like a flood,

Followed by rumbling earthquakes of hunger. 

 

Within all the rotten, 

The old have forgotten 

The rustle of peach trees 

That will never die,

Captured proudly in family photographs,

Buried under gray rubble.   

 

“Land of the free”

And home to the wealthy.  

White meant purity, now, supremacy. 

Oppression disguised as opportunity. 

A glittering star for every cratered country. 

 
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PersonalThemeAbstract

Philosophical/political critique of war, imperialism, systemic oppression with abstract moral questioning.

SparseMeasureDense

Dense stanzas with multiple ideas: violence, surveillance, famine, political hypocrisy compressed throughout.

DarkSentimentBright

Overwhelmingly negative: death, suffering, oppression, corruption, loss, hunger dominate emotional landscape.

StillEnergyExplosive

Explosive accusations, sharp interrogatives, vivid violent imagery creates high kinetic intensity and urgency.

MicroLengthEpic

Approximately 50+ lines across multiple stanzas; falls in extended lyric-protest range.

PlainFigurativeOrnamented

Rich metaphors (sky darkened, fiberglass rain, famine flood), personification (sun watches), layered symbolism throughout.

LyricVoiceDramatic

Primarily lyric voice with dramatic shift to direct accusatory address of Prime Minister; mostly internal.

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