Frustrated Hijacked a Bus.... Google it (3/2020 Phoenix AZ)
I wonder if i should swallow a bottle of percs, then fall to the surface/if the Holy Spirit promises a heavenly experience, it'll be worth it/i am not a threat to my baby mama or her ranger/in reality there a potential deadly virus to mother nature/the past is never the past, it comes to the table for any topic/pick pocket a wallet, bought a hot pocket, hijacked the metropolitan bus (True story) caught a felony so family court says custody aint a option/baby mama keeps the kids away from popa, awarded custody, aint it Nonsense?/145 due at the halfway home every Friday/no time to search for full time work, daily labor is the right way/if you aint got the rent for the halfway on Friday, then there's the drive way/ur 2 weeks late on rent, so hit the highway... Oh yea by the way, have a nice day/todays the third day the bus was late/arrived at job site 10 minutes passed 8/supervisor says I've been replaced, thanks for ur time, goodbye and please be safe/probation officer dials, I ignore the call for a couple hours/answer the phone, i can hear her tone and already know, she'll abuse her power/she needs me to drop a U.A. by 8, i tell her I'll be there shortly after/need a refill for my inhaler but the doc ignores the fax/frustration is at its max/if I wasn't on free healthcare and collecting stamps/he would've sent it back with xtra fills and that's a fact/ASU keep losing, Knicks are cruising , the Suns are always loosing/maybe next year will make some noise to avoid a early exit, shit who am I'm foolin, that's delusion/is there a solution to ending hunger for all the children/they say there's a war on drugs and every year there seizing billions/God willing they use it for starving children/but never that, it's for politicians and there misses/dogs and kittens/the devil blowin kisses, given unlimited wishes to his wick-kidds/just remember he owns there spirit, yay, that's the spirit!!!/thank you Jehovah for The Holy Spirit.
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PersonalThemeAbstract
Mostly autobiographical (incarceration, custody) with some abstract social commentary
SparseMeasureDense
Multiple ideas per line; rapid shifts between personal narrative, social critique, sports, theology
DarkSentimentBright
Predominantly negative (despair, systemic failure) with spiritual redemption moments
StillEnergyExplosive
High-velocity delivery; dense phrasing, urgent tone, explosive frustration throughout
MicroLengthEpic
Approximately 61+ lines; extended narrative-driven form
PlainFigurativeOrnamented
Mix of personification (Holy Spirit, devil), metaphor (war on drugs), some plain declarative statements
LyricVoiceDramatic
Primarily lyric first-person confession with narrative anecdotes; mostly internal voice
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