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Crystals in your hair

Reflect a beacon calling me closer,

Glowing as if they were their own source of light.

 

They came from the snowflakes

falling from the willow tree with its drooping branches,

And vines braided together by practicing children’s hands.

 

These diamonds shining from your hair,

So silky and sleek on its own,

Make all the other dancers in the room notice

That their snowflakes had melted into raindrops, sparkling much more dimly.

 

As for myself, I couldn’t tell you how I looked that fateful night-

I was too entranced

By the crystals in your hair.

 

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mstarks2018

My name is Maddie Starks. I love creative writing, and I live in Greenville, South Carolina. When I'm not writing poetry, I spend my time playing the guitar and singing. I enjoy writing poems that display the intrinsic value that words naturally hold. As; you read through my poetry, I'd like to emphasize the difference between the author and the narrator :)

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